Kia Ora Tsai! I really love the pictures you chose for this and I like what you have written, my only feedback though would be to check to make sure what you are writing makes sense I am only saying this because while I was reading I had a bit of a hard time at points because you had missed out some words, otherwise this looks and sounds really good and I hope you enjoyed it!
Kia Ora Tsai!
ReplyDeleteI really love the pictures you chose for this and I like what you have written, my only feedback though would be to check to make sure what you are writing makes sense I am only saying this because while I was reading I had a bit of a hard time at points because you had missed out some words, otherwise this looks and sounds really good and I hope you enjoyed it!